While I don't think it as the worst movie or even a terrible film (that goes to Attack of the Clones), but considering this was the Star Wars film that was supposed to start the entire new trilogy, after hyping up the fans who waited for another Star Wars for 16 years, yeah, it's bad. The Phantom Menace is infamous for being the worst movie prequel ever made and it deserves the reputation it got. These are Star Wars fixes I've posted in this sub: You don't have to read this previous version if you haven't. I felt like this Episode 1 fix-fic is the weakest one I've done so far, so I decided to touch up many elements, changing the scene, adding more details etc. He then exits the door, ready for his Council meeting.This post is the second draft of the rewrite I did a year ago. Anakin retracts the blade back into the hilt and clips it onto his belt as he puts one his black glove that will cover his prosthetic arm. Anakin used his new mechanical arm to grab the hilt and ignites the blue blade. The ignition has a gold switch that will ignite the blade.
Anakin analyzes the hilt as it has a more smoother and slim design. Anakin then lifts the crystal in the very middle of the construction as it quickly assembles into a new hilt. Grievous will lead the Droids into Battle, as Dooku will lead the Separatists into War, making deals with more systems to join his cause.Īnakin closed his eyes as he crossed his legs, ready to meditate as pieces of metal start rising in front of him as it begins constructing a new lightsaber hilt. Palpatine watches his new army prepare for battle.ĭooku, General Grievous, who just got his chest repaired but still suffers from his coughing problems, and the rest of the Separatist Council watch as the army of Battle Droids march into Separatist Cruisers as they prepare to defeat the Clone Troopers and help the Separatists and the Dark Side To win this war. Republic Gunships and AT-TE's were surrounding the whole army. Palpatine, along with Senator Bail Organa, and the rest of the Chancellor's advisors watch from the balcony as they see an army of Clone Troopers march into the Republic Cruiser, ready for War. The shroud of the Dark Side has fallen." Said Yoda. "Victory you say? Master Obi-Wan, not Victory. "I have to admit, without the Clones, we would not have gained our victory." "Until this War is over, we should pause his training and have him help us fight." Obi-Wan explained. "Anakin has grown far powerful beyond what I've seen." Said Obi-Wan. "Do you think it's wise to do the ceremony early?" Asked Mace. "Nevertheless, I feel we should keep a closer eye on the Senate." Said Mace. "Lies, deceit, grieving mistrust his ways are now." "Joined the Dark Side, Dooku has." Said Yoda, sitting in his chair of the Council room. "Senator Amidala informed me that Dooku told her that the Senate was being controlled by the Sith." Said Obi-Wan, talking to Master Windu.
The sunlight reflected through the windows of the Jedi Council chambers, leaving an orange glow surrounding it. "Grab that boy and bring him to me." Jabba ordered, as Fortuna walks out of the balcony, as he heads to the sad boy, who held onto a Mandalorian helmet as he slams it to the ground as a tombstone. "Fortuna!" Yelled Jabba, as his Twilek advisor, Bib Fortuna, walks to Jabba's location. Jabba looks at the balcony on the back of his castle, seeing a small boy in the back dunes of the sand. His Father was gone, Kamino might now be under Republic control, and there is no other family to turn to. He then grabbed his helmet as he falls to his knees, putting his head on the helmet in sadness. "Everything is going as planned."Īs Boba finishes burying his father's body in the sands of Tatooine. "He finally embraced his rage." Said Dooku. "I have good news for you My Lord." Said Dooku. "Welcome back, Lord Tyranus." Sidious greeted, as they walk across the hangar. "The Force is with us, Master Sidious." Said Dooku. Dooku walked down the boarding ramp of the back of his ship. As the ship lands, a shadowy figure stood there, his face was covered by the shadow of his hood. The ship hangar entrance opens up as the Solar Sailer enters through the entrance and lands in the hangar. The ship then spots a secret headquarters that was completely inconspicuous.
As the ship flies across the stars, it folds it's translucent gold sail back into the front and into the atmosphere of the darker reaches of Corusaunt, the sky was dark red covered by bright red clouds as the ship passes by dark cottons of steam coming out of pipes of work factories.